{"id":21430,"date":"2022-11-15T09:50:00","date_gmt":"2022-11-15T07:50:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/?p=21430"},"modified":"2022-11-04T19:33:54","modified_gmt":"2022-11-04T17:33:54","slug":"indeterminate-in-autumn-poem","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/indeterminate-in-autumn-poem\/","title":{"rendered":"Indeterminate in Autumn, a Poem"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>&#8220;Indeterminate in Autumn&#8221; is a poem I wrote in response to the visual prompt of an alien head sitting on E.T.&#8217;s head placed atop a Chewbacca mug.  &#8220;Indeterminate in Autumn&#8221; was shortlisted for Autumn Writing Prize on Visual Verse. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<!--more-->\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-full\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"834\" height=\"615\" data-attachment-id=\"21435\" data-permalink=\"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/indeterminate-in-autumn-poem\/patricia-furstenberg-visual-verse-indeterminate-in-autumn\/\" data-orig-file=\"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/10\/Patricia-Furstenberg-Visual-Verse-Indeterminate-in-Autumn.jpg\" data-orig-size=\"834,615\" data-comments-opened=\"1\" data-image-meta=\"{&quot;aperture&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;credit&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;camera&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;caption&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;created_timestamp&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;copyright&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;focal_length&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;iso&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;shutter_speed&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;orientation&quot;:&quot;0&quot;}\" data-image-title=\"Patricia Furstenberg Visual Verse Indeterminate in Autumn\" data-image-description=\"&lt;p&gt;Patricia Furstenberg Indeterminate in Autumn, a Poem Visual Verse&lt;\/p&gt;\n\" data-image-caption=\"&lt;p&gt;Patricia Furstenberg Indeterminate in Autumn, a Poem Visual Verse&lt;\/p&gt;\n\" data-large-file=\"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/10\/Patricia-Furstenberg-Visual-Verse-Indeterminate-in-Autumn.jpg\" src=\"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/10\/Patricia-Furstenberg-Visual-Verse-Indeterminate-in-Autumn.jpg\" alt=\"Patricia Furstenberg Indeterminate in Autumn, a Poem Visual Verse\" class=\"wp-image-21435\" title=\"Indeterminate in Autumn, a poem, Patricia Furstenberg\" srcset=\"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/10\/Patricia-Furstenberg-Visual-Verse-Indeterminate-in-Autumn.jpg 834w, https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/10\/Patricia-Furstenberg-Visual-Verse-Indeterminate-in-Autumn-300x221.jpg 300w, https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/10\/Patricia-Furstenberg-Visual-Verse-Indeterminate-in-Autumn-768x566.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 767px) 89vw, (max-width: 1000px) 54vw, (max-width: 1071px) 543px, 580px\" \/><figcaption>Patricia Furstenberg Indeterminate in Autumn, a Poem Visual Verse<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>Read it on Visual Verse <a href=\"https:\/\/visualverse.org\/submissions\/indeterminate-in-autumn\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">here<\/a> or below:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Indeterminate in Autumn<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>She changed her mind, the arcane autumn, like maidens<br>change their mood. Green leaves to aureate she painted<br>painstaking art that deters young at heart. The book<br>of life has turned another leaf for me. Chewbacca went to war.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>More reds to follow, quiver of crimson stains from strange<br>lost flags that never were more than a fight, forgotten<br>now, tucked postcards in between the leaves of book. Then brown,<br>not dead, but whisper-ready, rustle of home, E.T.-like,<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>come alive with every step. \u201cGo home!\u2019 Lonesome,<br>defiant autumn shakes her elysian mane and leaves fly, eviscerated,<br>her tome still thick while mine has changed a chapter. Kismet.<br>An alien, where life once held a meaning and path was straight amid lush greens.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I\u2019m lonely now and sit disconsolate with cup by heart<br>and from the eaves the beldam winter, black claws<br>for fingers, watches me with greed. A chimera<br>for now. Behind, blue sky. My heart, laden in black.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>Copyright \u00a9 Patricia Furstenberg. All Rights Reserved.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Thank you for reading.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"twitter-tweet\"><p dir=\"ltr\" lang=\"en\">Our shortlist is out &#x1f4e2; We are pleased to release the full list of writers who made it through to our shortlist for the Visual Verse Autumn Writing Prize. These 20 writers were selected, through an anonymised judging process, from a total of 141 submissions.<\/p>\u2014 Visual Verse: An Anthology of Art and Words (@visual_verse) <a href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/visual_verse\/status\/1581233135567921152?ref_src=twsrc%5Etfw\">October 15, 2022<\/a><\/blockquote> <script async=\"\" src=\"https:\/\/platform.twitter.com\/widgets.js\" charset=\"utf-8\"><\/script>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"twitter-tweet\"><p dir=\"ltr\" lang=\"en\">Enjoy Indeterminate in Autumn by Patricia Furstenberg <a href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/PatFurstenberg?ref_src=twsrc%5Etfw\">@PatFurstenberg<\/a>, shortlisted for the Visual Verse Autumn Writing Prize<a href=\"https:\/\/t.co\/P3CEyA4sxh\">https:\/\/t.co\/P3CEyA4sxh<\/a><\/p>\u2014 Visual Verse: An Anthology of Art and Words (@visual_verse) <a href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/visual_verse\/status\/1581233155339874305?ref_src=twsrc%5Etfw\">October 15, 2022<\/a><\/blockquote> <script async=\"\" src=\"https:\/\/platform.twitter.com\/widgets.js\" charset=\"utf-8\"><\/script>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Indeterminate in Autumn, a Poem:<br \/>\n&#8220;She changed her mind, the arcane autumn, like maidens<br \/>\nchange their mood. Green leaves to aureate she painted&#8221;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":3540,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"Indeterminate in Autumn, a #poem\n\n#autumn #autumnal #leaves #fall #poetry #poetrycommunity ","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[1809,1,1330,2030],"tags":[5882,5883,5871,5870,5873,5872],"class_list":["post-21430","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-autumn","category-nature","category-poetry","category-symbolism","tag-autumn-2","tag-autumnleaves","tag-alien-et-chewbacca-inspiration","tag-indeterminate-in-autumn","tag-introspective","tag-life-in-autumn-poetry"],"aioseo_notices":[],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/10\/cornelelian.jpg","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack-related-posts":[{"id":1129,"url":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/haiku-san-first-autumn-day-haiku-sunday-haikusan-via-patfurstenberg\/","url_meta":{"origin":21430,"position":0},"title":"Haiku-San, First Autumn Day Haiku","author":"Patricia Furstenberg","date":"02\/09\/2018","format":false,"excerpt":"First Autumn Day, a Sunday Haiku: Haiku-San First Autumn Day Early autumn leaves Rustling rusty carpet The child sweeps around. ~~~~~ Enjoy more Haiku in my new poetry and haiku book, As Good AS Gold: \"A book with an enormous heart for readers of all ages\" (Singing Librarian Books) \"Kids\u2026","rel":"","context":"In &quot;Autumn&quot;","block_context":{"text":"Autumn","link":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/category\/autumn\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"","src":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/07\/first-autumn-day-vision-webagency-3083-unsplash.s-e1616691923738.jpg?resize=350%2C200&ssl=1","width":350,"height":200},"classes":[]},{"id":1311,"url":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/haiku-san-autumn-haiku-sunday-haikusan-via-patfurstenberg\/","url_meta":{"origin":21430,"position":1},"title":"Autumn, Sunday Haiku, Haiku-San","author":"Patricia Furstenberg","date":"11\/11\/2018","format":false,"excerpt":"Autumn, a Sunday Haiku: Haiku-San Autumn, a Sunday Haiku: Haiku-San Painting leaf by leaf Oh, autumn, you wash your brush In each lake I see. ~ You can read more haiku on my blog here or in my new book of poetry, As Good AS Gold. \u201cAs typical with Furstenberg\u2019s\u2026","rel":"","context":"In &quot;Haiku&quot;","block_context":{"text":"Haiku","link":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/category\/haiku\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"","src":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/11\/Autumn-haiku-paintbrush-%40PatFurstenberg.jpg?resize=350%2C200&ssl=1","width":350,"height":200},"classes":[]},{"id":3516,"url":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/auburn-autumn-acorns\/","url_meta":{"origin":21430,"position":2},"title":"Auburn Autumn and Acorns","author":"Patricia Furstenberg","date":"12\/11\/2019","format":false,"excerpt":"Autumn let down her leaves so that sun's gold rays catch the shivers of red in her stems, the last bursts of life. Thus, Auburn was born.","rel":"","context":"In &quot;Autumn&quot;","block_context":{"text":"Autumn","link":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/category\/autumn\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"auburn leaves autumn","src":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/11\/auburn.jpg?resize=350%2C200&ssl=1","width":350,"height":200,"srcset":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/11\/auburn.jpg?resize=350%2C200&ssl=1 1x, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/11\/auburn.jpg?resize=525%2C300&ssl=1 1.5x, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/11\/auburn.jpg?resize=700%2C400&ssl=1 2x"},"classes":[]},{"id":3370,"url":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/scarlet-autumn-chestnuts\/","url_meta":{"origin":21430,"position":3},"title":"Scarlet Autumn and Chestnuts, Shades of Fall","author":"Patricia Furstenberg","date":"27\/10\/2019","format":false,"excerpt":"Autumn makes great use of scarlet, letting it fly with the wind or rolling it on the ground, at our feet. High-prices, like the woolen cloth used to be considered, once.","rel":"","context":"In &quot;Autumn&quot;","block_context":{"text":"Autumn","link":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/category\/autumn\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"autumn with scarlet lips @PatFurstenberg","src":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/10\/autumn-with-scarlet-lips-%40PatFurstenberg.jpg?resize=350%2C200&ssl=1","width":350,"height":200,"srcset":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/10\/autumn-with-scarlet-lips-%40PatFurstenberg.jpg?resize=350%2C200&ssl=1 1x, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/10\/autumn-with-scarlet-lips-%40PatFurstenberg.jpg?resize=525%2C300&ssl=1 1.5x"},"classes":[]},{"id":3056,"url":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/feuille-morte-nightingale-in-autumn\/","url_meta":{"origin":21430,"position":4},"title":"Feuille-Morte and A Nightingale in Autumn","author":"Patricia Furstenberg","date":"18\/10\/2019","format":false,"excerpt":"Autumn is splashing out its colors, giving away her best dead leaves, feuilles mortes. But what vibrant colors. Have you heard the nightingale singing, hiding behind a philamot leaf? Why is she?","rel":"","context":"In &quot;Authors and books&quot;","block_context":{"text":"Authors and books","link":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/category\/authors\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"","src":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/10\/Philamot-Philomela-Nightingale-autumn-%40PatFurstenberg.jpg?resize=350%2C200&ssl=1","width":350,"height":200,"srcset":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/10\/Philamot-Philomela-Nightingale-autumn-%40PatFurstenberg.jpg?resize=350%2C200&ssl=1 1x, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/10\/Philamot-Philomela-Nightingale-autumn-%40PatFurstenberg.jpg?resize=525%2C300&ssl=1 1.5x"},"classes":[]},{"id":1419,"url":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/haiku-san-chrysanthemum-haiku-sunday-haikusan-via-patfurstenberg\/","url_meta":{"origin":21430,"position":5},"title":"Chrysanthemum Haiku, Haiku-San","author":"Patricia Furstenberg","date":"25\/11\/2018","format":false,"excerpt":"Chrysanthemum , a Sunday Haiku: Haiku-San Chrysanthemum Tiny diamonds, Bright seeds sprout new life for you. Hear their happy laugh. ~ You can read more haiku on my blog here or in my new book of poetry, As Good AS Gold. \"Endearing and lovely, a joy in a book that\u2026","rel":"","context":"In &quot;Celebrations&quot;","block_context":{"text":"Celebrations","link":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/category\/celebrations\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"","src":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/11\/Chrysanthemum-autumn-haiku-%40PatFurstenberg.jpg?resize=350%2C200&ssl=1","width":350,"height":200},"classes":[]}],"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p9Kh37-5zE","jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/21430","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=21430"}],"version-history":[{"count":7,"href":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/21430\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":21498,"href":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/21430\/revisions\/21498"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/3540"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=21430"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=21430"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/alluringcreations.co.za\/wp\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=21430"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}