Haiku-San, First Autumn Day Haiku

First Autumn Day, a Sunday Haiku: Haiku-San

First Autumn Day
First Autumn Day

Early autumn leaves

Rustling rusty carpet

The child sweeps around.


Enjoy more Haiku in my new poetry and haiku book, As Good AS Gold:

A book with an enormous heart for readers of all ages” (Singing Librarian Books)

Kids of all ages will love As Good As Gold. It is wonderful to read out loud, for them to read to you or, with so much potential for joining in and taking turns” (Julia Thum Writes)

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I chose the name Haiku-San as it derives from Haiku, meaning unusual verse in Japanese (hai=unusual, ku=verse, strophe) and San, the honorific Japanese title when speaking about people. San is also the phonetic transcription of the first syllable of the English word Sunday, Sun-day hence Haiku-San, a Sunday feature on Alluring Creations involving Haiku I write.

Text and Haiku-San © Patricia Furstenberg.

(Image courtesy Unsplash)

I hope you enjoyed my haiku. Let me know your thoughts in comment below.

2 Replies to “Haiku-San, First Autumn Day Haiku”

  1. This is truly lovely. I like the children sweeping around the leaves that is really all that they do. Moving them from one place to another. Beautiful words. Hugs, Joni

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